I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Soloia, This is a very interesting presentation you have created on Anzac day. I found your ideas on the Acrostic poem very emotional and I could picture and feel what you are trying to say in your poem as you have used interesting words, adjectives and punctuation marks to make your writing more interesting. Well done! Do say where you got all the information from? Did you use the links on the information slides on the site I put up on the literacy page on the class site? Where ever you write new information or facts, you need to say where you have got the information from. Thanks Soloia.
Thank you Manpreet, It was hard completing it and correcting it all by myself but My dad was helping me because I was stuck on the should war be banned?. That's how I get some of the Information from my dad and the link you have putted it up too, some slide I have done it myself. Thank you for your comment! :D
Hi Soloia,
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Do say where you got all the information from? Did you use the links on the information slides on the site I put up on the literacy page on the class site? Where ever you write new information or facts, you need to say where you have got the information from.
Thanks Soloia.
Thank you Manpreet, It was hard completing it and correcting it all by myself but My dad was helping me because I was stuck on the should war be banned?. That's how I get some of the Information from my dad and the link you have putted it up too, some slide I have done it myself. Thank you for your comment! :D
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