18/8/20
Dear: Pen Pal
My name is Luisapeta I am nine and I go to Edmund Hillary School
I have 4 siblings and 3 adults and I love to play netball and basketball.
My friends are Soloia,Tina,Victoria,Tiannah and Ana who are your friends?.
I also love art and I want to be a Police I as a job.
What do you want to be when you grow up?
My teacher is Manpreet and in my class we have a teacher aid called Brocna.
Do you have a teacher aid?
I am Samoan.
Hope I hear from you soon bye.
Luisapeta
My name is Soloia, I am 10 years old and I go to Edmund Hillary School.
I have 2 sisters and 3 brothers so I have 5 siblings, there are 8 people in my family.
I love to draw and play basketball or netball.
My favorite subject is art so when I grow up I want to be an Artist and
I also want to be a Magician. What do you want to be when you grow up?.
My teacher's name is Manpreet and Bronca.
What is your teacher's name?
I live in New Zealand and my culture is Samoan what is your Culture?.
I Hope to hear from you soon.
Soloia
Kia ora Soloia,
ReplyDeleteLovely letter written by you to your pen pal. Just proofread it again where you have written my treacer's name is Manpreet. it should be my teacher's names are Manpreet and Bronca as you are talking about two teachers so it should be are.
Wow you want to be a magician- how uncommon. I would definitely like to come to your magic shows Soloia. I hope you invite me.
Thank you for your correction about my mistakes. It will be amazing if I was a magician I would probably invite my friends like you.
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