I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Soloia this is Vaa and Victoria, we really enjoyed readying your show not tell writing task.We like how you wrote your telling sentence and turned it into showing sentence and also how you decribed your telling sentence.well done.
Kia ora Soloia, I really loved your show not tell T chart, I read your show not tell T chart and it was very good,I loved the part where you said " When I went outside it smelt weird and it was from the garden IT WAS POOP " Good job Soloia!
kia ora Soloia
ReplyDeleteHi soloia I like your background of your poster.Your photo is like cool.
Hi Soloia, I like this post because shows others how to add more to there work.
ReplyDeleteHi Soloia this is Vaa and Victoria, we really enjoyed readying your show not tell writing task.We like how you wrote your telling sentence and turned it into showing sentence and also how you decribed your telling sentence.well done.
ReplyDeleteHi Soloia,
ReplyDeleteI like the background of your poster. great job on showing the sentence.
By: Ana
Kia ora Soloia,
ReplyDeleteI really loved your show not tell T chart,
I read your show not tell T chart and it was very good,I loved the part where you said " When I went outside it smelt weird and it was from the garden IT WAS POOP "
Good job Soloia!